Difficult to read for a non-English   2 out of 5

Up to the author's usual standard. Very good book.  5 out of 5  (SM)

If I could, I would not give only 5, as score to this story. I would
give full round- 10 points!
Primitive Tribe, picking up Dozens of lost white women in the jungle
and enslave them like cattle for hard labor in mine, housekeeping,
handicrafts (such as weaving rope and baskets, tanned and softened
leather by chewing on it) and sexual services. And even dominated and
disciplined by mere children. And even cannibalism existed in this
primitive culture.
"Saved" by armed local gang, only to be sold on the market as slaves-
Two of the heroines were sold to a wealthy Mexican and been
transformed into draught animals and play sexual thing together with
many more as themselves in his vast ranch.  
Both women felt gratitude towards their new masters for the generosity
of spirit shown by adding them to the inventory of girls kept. They
felt fortunate and privileged to be considered part of that group
having been rescued from the bleary rhythm of life they had known
before. Their very being was the visceral essence of enslavement and
obedience to the will of their male masters and the final
acknowledgement of acceptance.    

For me, the only weak point in this story; is the too long detailed
description about the   bandings, and exaggerated bondage which in any
case, were unnecessary because their total docility and / or the
inefficiency it has created for their services to their masters,
because of those unnecessary elements. 
  5 out of 5  (Ruthy)

I am a big fan of the 'modern girl in the hands of primitive peoples'
scene and had high expections but they were unforfilled. The story has
little in the way of sex and is more about body altering and
enslavement. I don't recall one description of a female orgasm.  If
you like unremitting violence and mutilation OK; but not my choice.
Hence 3  3 out of 5  (Sooty)

Poorly written and very hard to read  1 out of 5

It was simply going over the same account of activities but using
different words. How many times does the reader need to be told, in
great detail, how a slave woman is fixed to a device that she has to
pull??? I ended up giving up!!!!  1 out of 5  (Drayman)

Second book in series, equally good.  5 out of 5  (SM)

Way too short.  2 out of 5

Looked to be an interesting tale to begin with, but sadly went
downhill. However, not as boring as State Control Book 2!!!!  3 out of
5  (Drayman)

I alway enjoy his writings and this is up to his usual standard.  5
out of 5  (SM)

Have enjoyed a number of this author's books, although he tells rough
stories.  
Were the introductory chapter(s) omitted from this format?  Could not
determine how the strict environment came to be, nor understand the
point of the cruel, harsh story.  Decided not to bother reading the
sequel.
Would like to be able to delete books from members' library and to
organize by author or topic,  and ask that these capabilities be added
to the pkg.   Thank you.    3 out of 5  (Lena)

I always like this guy's books.  5 out of 5

The author clearly has a wonderful imagination, but his prose is
barely readable. I had to force myself to even finish the book.  2 out
of 5

 HIGHLY RECOMMENDED. Having read erotica widely for several decades, I
believe that this volume, even more than the excellent Vol. 1, is the
best example of slave breaking/training/auction I've come across to
date!! Extremely detailed, strong and imaginative it fails to satisfy
completely only in lacking Vols. 3 thru 103!!!    5 out of 5  (Eljay)

Strong, detailed, imaginative and well written....recommended.  4 out
of 5  (Eljay)

I have always enjoyed his stories of tight bondage and highly
recommend this books.  5 out of 5

Note that while this story is set in Asia, it features primarily black
male on white female domination. Weird. 

But it was still a great read even though that's not my fetish. The
extreme sadism doesn't rely on a "OMG, white woman with a black man!"
reaction. 

The ending bumped this from a 4/5 to a 5/5 for me.  5 out of 5  (nf)

This is awfully long winded with over detailed and loving details of
bondage and subjugation of females. If this is for you then OK but I
found the relentless over detail tiring and un arousing. I did not
finish the book.   3 out of 5  (Sooty)

interesting idea but best for extra-fan of bondage and i'm not that
high into bondage and describing slave positions. At one stage, an
excess focus on these 2 valid points is having a dull effect and the
initial excitement faded away. my advise : you have talent but less on
the bondage catalogue more on sex, action and excitement.  3 out of 5 
(ohu)

 Very strong, merciless and detailed story of extreme bondage,
training and submission.  4 out of 5  (Eljay)

I have always enjoyed this author's stories and I recommend them
highly.  5 out of 5

Interesting book with climax in crescendo maybe it is too simple in
definition of characters but is intriguing and ... well enjoy!  4 out
of 5  (Giles)

Very good story and had some erotic moments.  Too many characters for
me to keep tract of but liked it anyway.  3 out of 5  (febah47)

I love such stories: It step, from the beginning, right in heart of
the matter and from the start until the end of the story it doesn't
let go. The tension of the events does not stop.
Giving full scores in this story was done without any hesitation and
easily.
This is the kind of story I like very much:
From young Western scholars, they have become, at once! The most
menial slaves in deep Africa.  Reduced to the level of livestock to
African masters.
By the way, I could easily empathize with the character of Joanna and
her fantasies dream...
  5 out of 5  (Ruthy)

A good story but to much discription of machanical devices and not
enough effect on the victims.   4 out of 5  (Stark47)

Well written with the main theme being the act of kidnapping and
initial processing of the captive women.  Nothing much about what
happens to them after that.  The author seems to be confused about the
definition of infibulation.  This book could almost be a short
collection of short stories about kidnapping.  4 out of 5  (Sir
Kaiser)

One of the best as far as I am concerned but he only did a few books.
Well worth buying.  5 out of 5

the books starts off ok it is a pity that the auther did not contue
with the girls training   2 out of 5  (ken)

Just 'clinical' telling... No insight in feelings or experience of the
'players'  2 out of 5

Pretty bad story.  Promising start but goes down hill rapidly.  Would
of been much better if the author stuck with the original abductees as
the gist of this story.  1 out of 5

Very good and strong. Always enjoyed his books.  5 out of 5

Excellent book, though some descriptions drag on too much.  5 out of 5
 (Chicagossl)

I almost want my money back. I've read more engaging watch logs.
Character development and plot advancement were lost in a boring
monologue by a nameless and witless narrator. It was well into the
story before you realized this was a fantasy world.   2 out of 5  (




)

I have always enjoyed the author's writing and highly recommend it.  5
out of 5

Not as good as "Birchmont Academy," but a similar mixture of bondage,
CP and humiliation. Less emphasis on semi-consensual submission than
in some of his other books.  4 out of 5  (MW)

Good book. Up to his usual standard.  5 out of 5

I wish I could give this book a higher rating, and I wish it was
longer, because I could read on forever.  The author's eloquent
description of the captive women's treatment is pure pleasure to read.
 Looking forward to more of his work.  5 out of 5  (Sir Kaiser)

Old Themme but pretty well told  4 out of 5