Excellent book with a nice "Ten steps to hell" construction. Ellie
experiments the "quicksand effect"...the more you wriggle the more you
sink!
Would have loved to see more F/f, the one who betrayed Ellie could
have been involved hands on in the course of the second part of her
training.
Would have been great to witness her further humiliation in a sheikh's
house and some latex slavery.
Who would like to sample and taste the end?  5 out of 5  (Dressage10)

Good read.  Shocking ending....  5 out of 5  (Bigrdr)

Great read - Loved the ending  5 out of 5  (Kat35)

One of the best books I have read in a long time.   Everyone should
have a copy of this in their library.  5 out of 5  (Chicagossl)

Vivid descriptions and action in the brothels. Makes you wish you
could be there. Highly rated for those parts. Did not like the final
chapters involving animals.  5 out of 5  (Publicscho)

Wasn't enamoured with it. The lack of description of the deflowering
of the virgins was lame. Kept reading expecting it to get better but
it didn't.  2 out of 5  (Fred)

I got bored, and three episodes to the end, I left the story.  3 out
of 5  (Ruthy)

A good story, moves along and maintains interest.  A bit moderate for
my tastes but worth the read.  Lola enjoys the transformation to much,
no fight no fun.  4 out of 5  (Stark47)

It is the ultimate revenge, no doubt. But ... The way to achieve
Molly's subjugation is unconvincing and unreliable. Petty because it
is, in my view, spoiling the plot of the story and therefore the
belief on it that it was supposed to produce.  
I'm also not a fan of "gang bang" as well as a woman but also because,
again, it makes the story not reliable. I do not think a woman can
enjoy and to cooperate with such thing and I do not think that anyone
who wants to continue to take advantage of her would endanger her
physically and take such risk of diseases, despite the security
measures taken during the event.
  3 out of 5  (Ruthy)

The humiliation and embarassing situations in this story are varied
and many however there is little explicit sex. The sex is implied  but
for fans of humiliation I haven't seen better.  4 out of 5  (qubert)

The most enjoyable book and series I've read in years .looking forward
to Mr Sparrowhalk,s next publication.particularly if either Pippa or
Aimee are involved .  5 out of 5  (Chaffer)

Up to the author's usual standard. Very good book.  5 out of 5  (SM)

If I could, I would not give only 5, as score to this story. I would
give full round- 10 points!
Primitive Tribe, picking up Dozens of lost white women in the jungle
and enslave them like cattle for hard labor in mine, housekeeping,
handicrafts (such as weaving rope and baskets, tanned and softened
leather by chewing on it) and sexual services. And even dominated and
disciplined by mere children. And even cannibalism existed in this
primitive culture.
"Saved" by armed local gang, only to be sold on the market as slaves-
Two of the heroines were sold to a wealthy Mexican and been
transformed into draught animals and play sexual thing together with
many more as themselves in his vast ranch.  
Both women felt gratitude towards their new masters for the generosity
of spirit shown by adding them to the inventory of girls kept. They
felt fortunate and privileged to be considered part of that group
having been rescued from the bleary rhythm of life they had known
before. Their very being was the visceral essence of enslavement and
obedience to the will of their male masters and the final
acknowledgement of acceptance.    

For me, the only weak point in this story; is the too long detailed
description about the   bandings, and exaggerated bondage which in any
case, were unnecessary because their total docility and / or the
inefficiency it has created for their services to their masters,
because of those unnecessary elements. 
  5 out of 5  (Ruthy)

I am a big fan of the 'modern girl in the hands of primitive peoples'
scene and had high expections but they were unforfilled. The story has
little in the way of sex and is more about body altering and
enslavement. I don't recall one description of a female orgasm.  If
you like unremitting violence and mutilation OK; but not my choice.
Hence 3  3 out of 5  (Sooty)

In the 'Afterword' to this story the author notes that it's a
departure from his usual non-consensual work and asks for
readers'comments. My advice: return to his earlier/usual stories ASAP.
While a well-written work, this story follows the setting and
well-trodden path of literally hundreds of other D/S novels, while the
imagination, scope and strength of his earlier, non-consensual
settings have much more limited competition and even fewer peers. It's
basically a difference between being good-to-very-good among many or
being truly notable among a select few!   3 out of 5  (Veritas)

Loved it, 5 stars. Don't stop! This was very exciting.  5 out of 5 
(J)

A bit different from the author's usual flavor however the story
presents a descriptive and rousing tale of domestic domination of a
submissive wife to her demanding husband.  A story sure to please the
fans of this genre.    5 out of 5  (jason)

I did like this book about a beautiful lady submitting to her husband
and new dom, I would have liked a couple more chapters possibly
witnessing the nipple piercing  5 out of 5  (homebody1)

As a female D/S fanatic of sorts, the story was a seductive work of
art.  My body tingled from start to finish.  My only complaint thus 4
stars, it should have been twice as long. It felt like Maryann's
adventure was only just beginning.  4 out of 5  (slave t)

The theme of a pretty rich girl succumbing to her suppressed sexual
desires at the hands of her unexpectedly dominant husband is a very
entertaining thing for me.  I particularly enjoyed the way she was
drawn into experiencing her extreme fantasies in such a public and
deeply humiliating way.  Kudos to W.L. Dowd on this one!  5 out of 5

A little too soft on the BDSM side. Good story tho  3 out of 5

Certainly a slightly softer side to this author, but 100% enjoyable
for sure.  The characters are well developed and I hope we get to read
more about Charles and Maryann.  I expect it’s inevitable that Maryann
gets her nipples ringed soon.  5 out of 5  (steve)

An exceptional story of an introduction to submission.  The party
scene set up and description of the activities were very good.  Mr. &
Mrs. Driscoll are very well drawn characters.  Look forward to further
adventures of this couple  5 out of 5

I think this is a great build up to a very submissive conclusion for
Mrs Driscoll. I liked that her own curiosity was the source of the
change in their relationship (as was mine) although I was left
wondering how Charles became part of an obviously well established
club. However, his patience in waiting for her to come to the
fulfilment of her desires through his earlier but unacknowledged
discovery of these hit a note with me. My reasons for giving a 4
instead of a 5 are only two: that, as with most Silver Moon books, it
has the usual lack of decent proofreading (and yes, i would happily
help with this); and that it could have done with being longer! I like
reading non-consensual stories as fantasy but I appreciate the author
spending time on my preferred type of theme.  4 out of 5  (SubRat)

Interesting theme. Unique to me. In a couple of places I was left
pondering. Overall good.  4 out of 5  (Fred)

Excellent story.  I bit different for this author, but never the less,
it was top shelf.  The submissive wife and lesbian action was a real
turn on.  5 out of 5