Really a 4+...strong and varied. I can see that many readers could
rate it (justifiably) a "5" but it was a little too consensual for me
to rate it that high. Still I recommend it very highly.  4 out of 5 
(Eljay)

Very good, highly recommended. can't wait till part 3.  5 out of 5 
(steve)

Very exciting and good read as the story climax.   5 out of 5  (steve)

HIGHLY RECOMMENDED......well and intelligently written, very strong
and imaginative.   5 out of 5  (Eljay)

Imaginative, raw, brutal, lots and lots of sex.  5 out of 5  (Cary)

I own all of the stories you've published here and have enjoyed them
all.  My favorites are probably "Beyond Going Black" and "The Leasing
of Lindsay".  I liked the story overall, but would probably say I
liked the first half with Thomas better than the second with Devin. 
It seemed a little wilder and more adventurous.  

It's been quite a while since you published.  Do you have something
new coming out soon?  5 out of 5  (authoritis)

A must read. Excellent story and a surprise ending  5 out of 5

not too bad but A twist in the end that was a occurrence that hubby
did not care for but that is what happens in the game   4 out of 5 
(homebody1)

Much better second book with developing characters and various
scenarios.     4 out of 5  (Bigrdr)

Excellent humiliation story, but just a little too pushy.
So, lose some of the credibility and it's a bit pity in my eyes.
Exploiters become exploited, executives become servants. Adults
humiliated by very young. In short - Transforming the world order
upside down.
A wonderful "Fertile ground" and endles opportunity for revenge and
abuse.
This story actually is composed of several stories, that the
relationship between them is very loose. But the ideas are very
diverse and rich. And the most important - very enjoyable!
‘Long Live the Revolution. Power to the People’!
  4 out of 5  (רUTH)

By making the white race inferior for generations, the author
neutralized, at once, the moment of humiliation, as it make "normal"
The treatment they get. 
 Furthermore, the special interest in this kind of stories has been
lost from the beginning. So instantly I lost interest in this story 
  2 out of 5  (Ruthy)

In the 'Afterword' to this story the author notes that it's a
departure from his usual non-consensual work and asks for
readers'comments. My advice: return to his earlier/usual stories ASAP.
While a well-written work, this story follows the setting and
well-trodden path of literally hundreds of other D/S novels, while the
imagination, scope and strength of his earlier, non-consensual
settings have much more limited competition and even fewer peers. It's
basically a difference between being good-to-very-good among many or
being truly notable among a select few!   3 out of 5  (Veritas)

Loved it, 5 stars. Don't stop! This was very exciting.  5 out of 5 
(J)

A bit different from the author's usual flavor however the story
presents a descriptive and rousing tale of domestic domination of a
submissive wife to her demanding husband.  A story sure to please the
fans of this genre.    5 out of 5  (jason)

I did like this book about a beautiful lady submitting to her husband
and new dom, I would have liked a couple more chapters possibly
witnessing the nipple piercing  5 out of 5  (homebody1)

As a female D/S fanatic of sorts, the story was a seductive work of
art.  My body tingled from start to finish.  My only complaint thus 4
stars, it should have been twice as long. It felt like Maryann's
adventure was only just beginning.  4 out of 5  (slave t)

The theme of a pretty rich girl succumbing to her suppressed sexual
desires at the hands of her unexpectedly dominant husband is a very
entertaining thing for me.  I particularly enjoyed the way she was
drawn into experiencing her extreme fantasies in such a public and
deeply humiliating way.  Kudos to W.L. Dowd on this one!  5 out of 5

A little too soft on the BDSM side. Good story tho  3 out of 5

Certainly a slightly softer side to this author, but 100% enjoyable
for sure.  The characters are well developed and I hope we get to read
more about Charles and Maryann.  I expect it’s inevitable that Maryann
gets her nipples ringed soon.  5 out of 5  (steve)

An exceptional story of an introduction to submission.  The party
scene set up and description of the activities were very good.  Mr. &
Mrs. Driscoll are very well drawn characters.  Look forward to further
adventures of this couple  5 out of 5

I think this is a great build up to a very submissive conclusion for
Mrs Driscoll. I liked that her own curiosity was the source of the
change in their relationship (as was mine) although I was left
wondering how Charles became part of an obviously well established
club. However, his patience in waiting for her to come to the
fulfilment of her desires through his earlier but unacknowledged
discovery of these hit a note with me. My reasons for giving a 4
instead of a 5 are only two: that, as with most Silver Moon books, it
has the usual lack of decent proofreading (and yes, i would happily
help with this); and that it could have done with being longer! I like
reading non-consensual stories as fantasy but I appreciate the author
spending time on my preferred type of theme.  4 out of 5  (SubRat)

Interesting theme. Unique to me. In a couple of places I was left
pondering. Overall good.  4 out of 5  (Fred)

Excellent story.  I bit different for this author, but never the less,
it was top shelf.  The submissive wife and lesbian action was a real
turn on.  5 out of 5

Great story and a different view of WL Dowd.  5 out of 5  (AD)

Good read, enjoyable.  4 out of 5  (SM)

On the face of it, it seems that, this story has all the elements
together to cook up a story just following a recipe of my tastes. An
arrogant white  Attorney  , a black criminal's Revenge, multi-white
slaves, a black team in controls, Pony girls training, to the point of
 full cooperation of the white slaves in pleasing their black masters,
 as been reflected in the arrogant former lawyer own words: " I’m such
a lucky mare!", "‘It is a great honor to serve you, sir". A lawyer’s
mind that was once forensic and sharp now absorbed by one imperative-
pleasing her black master.
So, all the elements existed in this story yet, I felt a certain
disappointment, a big screw-up.  
The diversification of the story, the poor organization -damaged very
hardly the quality of the story. Perhaps too short to well developed
this  story well. Such a shame! 
  4 out of 5  (Ruthy)

a very worthwhile read  5 out of 5

Alternative history book, interesting.  4 out of 5  (SM)

Great story.  5 out of 5  (Grecco)

Up to the author's usual standard. Very good book.  5 out of 5  (SM)

If I could, I would not give only 5, as score to this story. I would
give full round- 10 points!
Primitive Tribe, picking up Dozens of lost white women in the jungle
and enslave them like cattle for hard labor in mine, housekeeping,
handicrafts (such as weaving rope and baskets, tanned and softened
leather by chewing on it) and sexual services. And even dominated and
disciplined by mere children. And even cannibalism existed in this
primitive culture.
"Saved" by armed local gang, only to be sold on the market as slaves-
Two of the heroines were sold to a wealthy Mexican and been
transformed into draught animals and play sexual thing together with
many more as themselves in his vast ranch.  
Both women felt gratitude towards their new masters for the generosity
of spirit shown by adding them to the inventory of girls kept. They
felt fortunate and privileged to be considered part of that group
having been rescued from the bleary rhythm of life they had known
before. Their very being was the visceral essence of enslavement and
obedience to the will of their male masters and the final
acknowledgement of acceptance.    

For me, the only weak point in this story; is the too long detailed
description about the   bandings, and exaggerated bondage which in any
case, were unnecessary because their total docility and / or the
inefficiency it has created for their services to their masters,
because of those unnecessary elements. 
  5 out of 5  (Ruthy)

I am a big fan of the 'modern girl in the hands of primitive peoples'
scene and had high expections but they were unforfilled. The story has
little in the way of sex and is more about body altering and
enslavement. I don't recall one description of a female orgasm.  If
you like unremitting violence and mutilation OK; but not my choice.
Hence 3  3 out of 5  (Sooty)